2024年12月大学英语四、六级作文试题评析(一)
作者 贾从永
发表于 2025年9月

四级

Directions: Suppose the university newspaper is inviting submissions from the students for its coming edition on how to enrich students’ knowledge of traditional Chinese culture. You are now to write an essay for submission. You will have 30 minutes to write the essay. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

这道大学英语四级作文试题要求考生论述如何丰富学生的中国传统文化知识。所谓丰富学生的中国传统文化知识,就是让学生了解更多的中国传统文化。由于学生是一个正在接受教育的群体,所以本文可以着重阐述学校应该采取哪些措施,才能让学生更加了解中国的传统文化。这篇作文属于说明文的范畴。写这种类型的作文,考生只需要说清楚怎么做就可以了,议论的成分不多。

我们可以把这篇作文写三个段落。本文要讨论如何丰富学生的中国传统文化知识,首先的问题是:什么是中国传统文化?因此本文宜用定义法开头,即第一段先给中国传统文化下一个简明通俗的定义——中国人代代相传的信仰和行为方式。然后指出学校是传授这种知识的主要机构。第二段阐述学校应该如何向学生传授中国传统文化的知识。中国的传统文化包罗万象、博大精深,让学生了解中国传统文化的方式也多种多样。限于篇幅,我们不妨选取两个方面阐述。首先,学校可以鼓励学生参与庆祝中国的传统节日的活动,如春节、端午节和中秋节。通过这些活动学生不仅能了解诸如尊老爱幼这样的中国风俗,而且还能更深刻地理解中国的传统价值观。其次,学校还可以组织丰富多彩的活动以便让学生了解中国的传统文化。比如,举办传统服装时装秀或民歌演唱比赛。这些活动能够激励学生深入探索中国的传统文化。本文可以用建议法结尾。第三段先指出中国的传统文化作为我们国家的灵魂,在很大程度上造就了我们。然后建议学校发挥积极的作用,把中国的传统文化一代一代传下去。下面请看参考范文:

Traditional Chinese culture refers to Chinese people’s beliefs and behavior that are handed down from one generation to another. Schools are the primary institutions for imparting this knowledge.

As students learn best through experiences, schools can encourage students to participate in the celebration of such traditional Chinese festivals as the Spring Festival, the Dragon Boat Festival and the Mid-Autumn Festival. Through these activities, students not only learn about Chinese customs, such as greeting elders respectfully and caring for the young, but gain a deeper understanding of traditional values. Schools can also organize a variety of activities to help students know about Chinese culture. For instance, a fashion show of traditional costume or a singing competition of folk songs can inspire students to delve deeper into traditional Chinese culture.

As the soul of our nation, traditional Chinese culture is a vital part of what makes us who we are. So schools should play an active role in passing down the knowledge of traditional Chinese culture from generation to generation. (168 words)

语言亮点借鉴:

1. Traditional Chinese culture refers to Chinese people’s beliefs and behavior that are handed down from one generation to another. 中国的传统文化指的是中国人世代相传的信仰和行为模式。

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